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New found footage horror series

My fellow student and I are creating a found footage horror series based around the famous ridges (Insane asylum) at Ohio University. We are two media arts students studying video production and Animation.

Here is a link to the first episode: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9EXG39i6tFA

Feedback would be lovely since we are both new to the horror genre and creating a web series.

Thank you.
 
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hey dude, welcome to the forum!!

my first impression is it drags on a bit with the text. I think you could work it better by having the guy sat in front of the camera explaining and some freaky cuts thrown in to keep people interested maybe?

has promise though, keep working on it
 
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