archived-videos My Short/Please give me some Critiques and criticisms

[RyanTLaBee]

Here is my new short i shot of my daughter. I wrote, shot and edited this all in 3 hrs. Just trying to get fast while also saying something and creating something cool. Please give me your thoughts and check it out!
http://youtu.be/x2QTc6m3R70http://youtu.be/x2QTc6m3R70

 

[Will Write For Latte]

I thought it was very clever. And she is a cutie-pie, so adorable. I thought is was for some 'Kickstarter" project. But all in-all, very clever and funny.

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Very nice. That made my day

The shots are a bit too closeup, the shallow DOF is a bit extreme, it's a bit shaky at times, and it's a bit underexposed/not lit well. But it was cute, and funny, and clever.

 

[Will Vincent]

cute. Might want to watch the audio levels though. She's already difficult to understand, and to hear.. the music was a bit too loud in comparison with her voice for me.

 

[LDS]

cute!

loved it!

only the audio bit low but - great idea!

 

[schnizor]

I thought this was brilliant Ryan! I would of changed one thing, at that was hearing and possibly seeing the female parental unit in this short. Other than that, I like it.

 

[joejohn123]

that was cute.

I had idea where kids of 3/5 yr old utter great lines of great actors in the movie.(impersonating without wearing fancy dress)

like , robert denaro,
alpachino,
jack nicholson,
Meryl streep,
Clint east wood ,
Kate winslet and so on...

 

[RyanTLaBee]

Thanks everyone for the compliments and the advice. It means a lot to me. Cannot grow as a filmmaker without honest truth and outside perspective. Again, thank you!

 

[oli5d]

Awesome. love it.

 

[cloud_from_italy]

Very Very funny and sweet!!
I like the idea and above all the editing... cuts are pleasant!
I have a question: i've noticed the good quality of the high dynamic range... Did you obtained it in post production or did you use a mod?
Thank you