Some people had commented on previous script threads I had made saying that it was hard to follow because there was no type of overall story to compare the scene too. Here is the overall summary, what do you think?
Keith is having visions of a changing future that continually leads to the death of him and his friends. Not willing to actually let this happen, he decides to inform the guys of what he knows. This leads to the future making a drastic change and events become rearranged. He doesn’t know who it is that is tracking them. He discovers, after Tyler changes the future again and Joey’s father died, that it is Joey who is telling their information to a tracker. Joey was selling information about the resistance group to save his father’s job. When his job was done, the guys who employed him killed his father to show that they couldn’t be messed with. The guys plan on removing Joey from the group but they need a confession to ensure that he won’t do it again. They don’t know that Joey has actually been sending them information to set the government into a trap. He was lacing the real information with false tidbits that would get the government’s top leaders to ransack a meeting of the Resistance that would actually be a huge ambush.
Also, there is a much larger overall story that ranges from years before this to years after. I have grown attached to this story and would love to eventually make a prequel and/or sequel(s) for this film.
Keith is having visions of a changing future that continually leads to the death of him and his friends. Not willing to actually let this happen, he decides to inform the guys of what he knows. This leads to the future making a drastic change and events become rearranged. He doesn’t know who it is that is tracking them. He discovers, after Tyler changes the future again and Joey’s father died, that it is Joey who is telling their information to a tracker. Joey was selling information about the resistance group to save his father’s job. When his job was done, the guys who employed him killed his father to show that they couldn’t be messed with. The guys plan on removing Joey from the group but they need a confession to ensure that he won’t do it again. They don’t know that Joey has actually been sending them information to set the government into a trap. He was lacing the real information with false tidbits that would get the government’s top leaders to ransack a meeting of the Resistance that would actually be a huge ambush.
Also, there is a much larger overall story that ranges from years before this to years after. I have grown attached to this story and would love to eventually make a prequel and/or sequel(s) for this film.
