Man this is really good!
Reminds me of my film festival days, and attending shorts programs.
It could use a little audio cleanup. The wind in the mic track isn't even needed since there is no dialogue you can just use some clean ambient. And when he's approaching the man in the alley it sounds like he is about to say "Hey" and it cuts off, so that needs to be cleaner.
The photographs looks a little odd, like photo copies, and some looked worn?
But hey, I still think it's pretty awesome!