Hey, guys! Since I told you about my idea, I changed a lot. For example, my female protagonist’s name isn’t Luna anymore. Now I decide its Mara. – But that’s not important for this thread yet. I also created a background story for the character Raymond. I want to know if it’s cheesy now. (Yah! You can tell me I should just write. But I don’t wanna a character, who is just made of flesh and bone. I wanna give them A SOUL. So…) Ok. Here it is:
Before Raymond meet Mara, he worked for the company DEFORM (Department for modifying creatures). Raymond never knew what they do exactly there. The company is also a pharma and cosmetic company. Until he was chosen for a top-secret program. There, he found out that they manipulate the DNA of werewolves, vampires and much more creatures to create mutants. Or they were looking for a cure to deaden the powers of vampires and werewolves. Disgusted by these experiments, he decided to give his job up. Later, he meets Mara.
So … Is it a good idea to give him a moral background? Or is it too typical for novice authors, who hope it’s good?
Before Raymond meet Mara, he worked for the company DEFORM (Department for modifying creatures). Raymond never knew what they do exactly there. The company is also a pharma and cosmetic company. Until he was chosen for a top-secret program. There, he found out that they manipulate the DNA of werewolves, vampires and much more creatures to create mutants. Or they were looking for a cure to deaden the powers of vampires and werewolves. Disgusted by these experiments, he decided to give his job up. Later, he meets Mara.
So … Is it a good idea to give him a moral background? Or is it too typical for novice authors, who hope it’s good?