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archived-videos My Last Day - Short Film Shot in Boston

This was looking well shot -- but nine minutes in, and nothing much is happening. He didn't even bother to walk around the building to say goodbye to the girls. It's like, there should be more plot by then.

What the hell's he trying to do?

Not enough, so I gave up.
 
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