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archived-videos My first short film, take a look.

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Frcachucho

I have spent the past two years setting my views in creating my own independent films, and learning about the art of film making. I made my first ever short film with an average camcorder, tripod and lights which i made myself. Have a look at it and let me know what your thoughts are on it.

It's called The FraGile
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz4DpAwW734

Thanks.
 
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The ending made my heart skip a beat, quite literally. That is a very nice little film. Maybe you can do something about the contrast in the b&w, at the moment it looks a little soft, and sorry to say, bland. But it's a nice length. Good effort for a first film. Good work.
 
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