For such a simple concept, this movie sure did drag. Over 10 minutes for something with virtually no plot. Speaking of plot, you'll hear people say this here a lot, but story is king! As cool as some of the action sequences were, there was absolutely no substance. The only reason I watched past the first 15 seconds of the movie was because I wanted to help a fellow forumer. With that being said, I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a spoof of the genre or not. There was nothing that seemed intentionally humorous, yet I found myself giggling a lot watching this film.
The SOUND! I've said this so many times already, and I've only recently joined. This is one of the first things I notice now, because I myself did not have a microphone until last week. Using the camera's onboard microphone for films is a TERRIBLE idea. I've been there, and I didn't like it there. The audio was just terrible. This isn't a judgement of your ability to make films, but rather a judgement of your equipment. Unfortunately, a shotgun microphone is the second most piece of equipment you need (next to your camera). Sound is half of the experience.
The writing... Was insanely cheesy and uninspired. If I could nitpick writing like I usually do, I would. But there isn't really anything to nitpick. The story was simplistic. The characters had zero depth. The dialogue felt unnecessary. I really don't want to offend you, but taking a writing class or two will do wonders!
With all that said, I will admit that my first film was a million times worse. This may have been a comedy that went way over my head, or you just fooling around with friends. Either way, if it was a serious effort, you may want to read some articles (there are a lot of great ones online), and watch some movies to see how everything comes together.
Sorry if any of this offended you. I don't think false praise ever helps! I want to see how far you've progressed, fellow Torontonian.