My first music video

[Patokid]

I wrote and directed this music video, my first. Music is not mine.
Please let me know what you think. Bad comments accepted.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cgCQ-Q1QPU

 

[Daniel_S]

I loved it! I thought the exposure and color helped to tell the story wonderfully. It took the viewer on a journey. Unfortunately, I had no idea what the song meant, but that hardly mattered to me, as I came away with a complete story. The camera motion helped motivate the visuals a lot. The only question I have is: Did she fake bite that peach? Very well done! Keep doing things.
And seeing as this is your first post here, WELCOME!

 

[Patokid]

Thanks a lot for the comments! Glad you liked it!
She did not fake bite the peach, hehe, it's a funny question.

 

[Daniel_S]

haha. It just looked like that to me. But very nice.