My first action-type film, would love some feedback!

[uncuthashbrown]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rqtAO9x_vUU

I usually just stick with comedy shtuff but I thought I'd try out action/comedy for a change. I'd love to hear what a filmmaking community such as yourselves think of it.

thanks in advance,
Joey

 

[USNFilms]

i liked it but it'd be cool if you actually got some shooting in it. anyway, i am your 32,000th sub and would you be interested in a box 4 box?

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http://www.youtube.com/usnfilms

 

[that1guyy]

Yeah it was pretty cool. And I agree with USN. I've read or heard somewhere, whenever you show a gun in a movie, it must be shot at some point. It's all about pleasing your audience isn't it?

 

[uncuthashbrown]

thanks for the feedback! I honestly didn't even think about that. next time there's a gun in a film of mine, gun shoots will be had!

 

[Defjon]

Yeah it was pretty cool. And I agree with USN. I've read or heard somewhere, whenever you show a gun in a movie, it must be shot at some point. It's all about pleasing your audience isn't it?

the rule of guns!!!!!
I learned that in 7th grade.. from my history teacher (strange i know).
I remember him showing us that scene from stand by me where they are playing with the gun.

 

[JoshL]

At the risk of inspiring time lost to TV Tropes....: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ChekhovsGun The quote at the top of the page is probably what your teacher was referring to, Defjon.