I would love some feedback on it and what you guys think I could incorporate to make it better. Also sorry if its confusing.
GOOD MOOD
Music- Green Light Aloe Blacc
Scene 1- House
Frames
1. Zoomed out frame on my entire body Reading a book
2. Zoom in onto my hand turning the page
3. Zoom out and I’m outside (Downtown)
Scene2- Downtown
Frames (DayTime)
1. Zoom out while I stand up and put the book down
2. Stead-cam of me walking forward past the camera(180’)
Scene 3- Candy Cane Park
Frames (DayTime)
1. Walking onto the bridge thing by Candy Cane Park.
2. Camera begin me wide angle looking at the view
3. Camera to my right looking at my face looking at the view
Scene 3- Downtown
Frames (NiteTime)
1. Side Angle as I’m walking down the brightly lit street
2. Behind me angle as I walk down the street
3. Zoomed in on wait to walking sign
4. Right up beside my head while I cross a street (slowly move side ways and backwards)
5. Car darts out at me slams on the breaks (side angle of car coming to a complete stop infront of me)
6. Camera on my upper body (noticing my reaction)
7. I walk beside the car ( camera does a 180’)
8. Guy starts yelling at me ( while music starts to play quietly)
9. Before I start to talk back I put on a smile (camera on my face)
10. I walk away ( camera in front of car to the right of me)
11. Black Screen.
GOOD MOOD
Music- Green Light Aloe Blacc
Scene 1- House
Frames
1. Zoomed out frame on my entire body Reading a book
2. Zoom in onto my hand turning the page
3. Zoom out and I’m outside (Downtown)
Scene2- Downtown
Frames (DayTime)
1. Zoom out while I stand up and put the book down
2. Stead-cam of me walking forward past the camera(180’)
Scene 3- Candy Cane Park
Frames (DayTime)
1. Walking onto the bridge thing by Candy Cane Park.
2. Camera begin me wide angle looking at the view
3. Camera to my right looking at my face looking at the view
Scene 3- Downtown
Frames (NiteTime)
1. Side Angle as I’m walking down the brightly lit street
2. Behind me angle as I walk down the street
3. Zoomed in on wait to walking sign
4. Right up beside my head while I cross a street (slowly move side ways and backwards)
5. Car darts out at me slams on the breaks (side angle of car coming to a complete stop infront of me)
6. Camera on my upper body (noticing my reaction)
7. I walk beside the car ( camera does a 180’)
8. Guy starts yelling at me ( while music starts to play quietly)
9. Before I start to talk back I put on a smile (camera on my face)
10. I walk away ( camera in front of car to the right of me)
11. Black Screen.