Movie clip

[mrpink89]

Hey guys, whats been good? it's been a while since I posted. Anyways here is a very small movie clip from the opening sequence of my movie. Mind you, it's un edited. What do you guys think. a pimp in the woods.


http://youtu.be/adDNYBhmDZI

 

[CraigL]

Interesting looking scene. =)

I feel though, that this is a power scene, I'd be tempted to film it from low, looking up at the pimp, to emphasize his dominance over the girl. Framing wise, it gets a little lopsided as he leans in, and I don't think the angle really helps the story visually.

He'd have to hold his position a bit closer, as the focus would change a lot, or have a good AC.

I don't like sticking to cliches for shot positions, but I do feel (especially if this is early on in the story) that an clever below-eyeline-looking-up shot would emphasize the situation of the girl and the relationship between the two characters in the scene.

Nice wardrobe there though!

CraigL

 

[mrpink89]

I know the angel would of worked great and originally wanted to use it. But a different "Whore" was running a little late and we had to get as much done as we could on this day so we had to change the angel. if we were to do the power shot the whore behide him would be missing and then would re appear again. But looking back at the whole scene in generall it is goofy and I wish I did it because these two whores in the scene are magicaly passing a bottle of vodka around back and fourth hahahaha luv B movie stuff.I like the audio in this clip, suprised since its the build in camera audio I was a bit impressed. thanks for watching man.