D'OH! Sorry, I downloaded it, watched it once, waited watched it again then promptly forgot to post my thoughts. Sorry DA.
First off, it needs more cowbell. If you're going to carry out the documentary feel then you need to do it all the way. The other actors in the waiting room should have acknowledged the camera's entrance. You could have had one of them object, or all three of them balk at signing the agreement to be filmed for no money form. Have your protagonist get into an argument with one of them. That would have added more punch to that scene. But for me, the whole thing needs punching up.
I enjoyed that actor quite a bit. Kind of a smart, edgy, more grown up Napoleon Dynamite.
I enjoyed it, but it needed more kick.
