A little narration short for the poem, "Mirror".
Thanks for any feedback.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uxpV77lBXo
Thanks for any feedback.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uxpV77lBXo
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archived-videos Mirror (By Sylvia Plath)
- Thread starter TwinCities
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It would have been nice if the whole thing was paced slower, or if it was slower, then really intense, then calm. It just felt slightly off to me. Some shots were framed a bit strangely, and the V.O. was too fast and the audio was a bit muddy. Ending too abrupt as well.
But on the other hand, there were some fantastic shots, the music was fitting, and the poem was powerful. I really like the experimental route you're going with your work. You're improved, developing a style, and finding your niche in filmmaking.
Keep on going
But on the other hand, there were some fantastic shots, the music was fitting, and the poem was powerful. I really like the experimental route you're going with your work. You're improved, developing a style, and finding your niche in filmmaking.
Keep on going