watch Mass Awakening Documentary 1st 5 minutes Rough Cut

[PositiveFuture]

Well maybe my name's mud in this town since I posted that sucky intro a month back.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xc79eSrvg8s

This one is guaranteed to suck less.

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From CrackerFunk:

Tell me, in one sentence, what this movie is about, and it better be specific.

An overview of positive technology that can help anyone break out of the illusory scarcity prison we've created.

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I'm just going to keep making this thing til it's good...

The clips are cleared. 50 per cent of the doc is my own work. The rest are clips used with permission. This isn't just a clipshow of other people's work.

Questions:

Any comments before I re-edit this thing?

Is the sound mix OK or is it a little low? I can't tell any more.

What's more annoying, black bars around the image or blocky images?

Is the 1st 90 seconds intriguing or confusing?

I have 20 minutes produced to this standard and an hour to a lower level that I'm going to upgrade. Won't be finished for 6 months.