archived-videos Looking for some feedback!

[erikbakhshi]

Hi everyone. if you have 5 minutes can you please check out a short little documentary I made for school. I just want a little feedback on the editing and any tips would be very helpful. Thank you!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Om8RB...0&feature=plcp

 

[TanadrineStudios]

the link gives a "validation error". Check that its pasted correctly

 

[erikbakhshi]

Oh sorry about that.
This one should work.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Om8RBEsSCG8&list=UU6yumIbzj9k-_ksRSO-hlUA&index=0&feature=plcp