Thank you for your feedback. The movie does eventually culminate in a run from the law as his dreams predict but it isn't the main scope of the story, it is more a psychological adventure.
As for Dan Harmons circle, that's a good point and I do think I've followed that in this script with the protaganists character arc, he goes through each of the stages although (spoiler) his final change is bittersweet. Obviously this is only the first 10 pages, so it only gives a glimpse of the story. If you do have any further interest in the concept though, I can send you the full script or a treatment to evaluate.