Nice film, good range of shots, I liked it.
Are you making more films? If so then let people know your networks, I guess it will be YouTube and then people will subscribe to you. If you subscribe back as well it helps the community grow together. Here's my first film and YouTube channel
http://youtu.be/h-KGBus-Mu4
Keep up the good work and carry on making films I say, make sure your sound levels are right and you are pretty much there.