Hi new dude! It was interesting reading the back story of how the film was made. It's okay on it's own, but impressive considering the budget and the experience level of the people involved. The cinematography, FX, and titles are very clean and well executed. But the story, writing, acting, and pacing are very weak. The unoriginality almost ruined it for me. I think you (or your dad-whoever made the film) need to focus on storytelling and writing rather than titles, SFX, and VFX. I am yet to watch the whole thing, but it seems to be following that predictable horror film formula.
Despite the flaws, I see a lot of talent involved, and hope to see more in the future. Good job!
