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[PassionPulp]

Ay
I started her. And she's very pretty.
This probably is in a very unacceptable screenplay format. I've been told that my descriptions would fit more in a novel.
But I kind of don't care because I'm my own filmmaker.
I'm not too consistent with my spacing, but no big deal.
I'm also not too proud of the dialogue. I wanted it to sound real, and this is how my friends would talk...sometimes. With witty banter and inside jokes. Anyway, it could be loads better. So I will work on it.
But everything else is pretty alpha. I'm looking forward to finishing and sharing this. Then one day..

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDosmDamcGxwSWC4-Uhcgav0d64_IESC1aPlYDAeTZI/edit?hl=en_US#

Danke.

 

[FantasySciFi]

Ay
I started her. And she's very pretty.
This probably is in a very unacceptable screenplay format. I've been told that my descriptions would fit more in a novel.
But I kind of don't care because I'm my own filmmaker.
I'm not too consistent with my spacing, but no big deal.
I'm also not too proud of the dialogue. I wanted it to sound real, and this is how my friends would talk...sometimes. With witty banter and inside jokes. Anyway, it could be loads better. So I will work on it.
But everything else is pretty alpha. I'm looking forward to finishing and sharing this. Then one day..

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDosmDamcGxwSWC4-Uhcgav0d64_IESC1aPlYDAeTZI/edit?hl=en_US#

Danke.

Yep. You summed it up perfectly. It shows talent but lacks discipline. There is a LOT of discipline required to organize, shoot and edit a festival quality movie. As you said, it's still alpha and still needs work. I enjoyed the read overall. I await the final product too.

 

[srbclarke]

I didn't read it. As a producer, if this came to my desk I'd push it to the side. Format is very important.

But hey, as you said, you;re your own filmmaker, break some rules