Funny attempt. There are good lipsync moments.
And funny when you do the chorus, you could have played a bit more with that.
It becomes a bit repetitive at times. And avoid laughing, although nice, on one of the shots from above you look like you are about to laugh, although I was almost laughing too, it loses the sense of reality
And the scene of sleeping at your doorstep, it's cool, although a bit strange and comes out of nowhere.
I know it's not meant to be a serious video, just some tips from a bad actor/director/writer (and no editing clues).
You have such potential, you should start adding more actors on your shorts, which is what I find the most difficult.
