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watch I'll Still Wish You Were Mine - Music Video

Hey everyone!

So my new album comes out tomorrow, so to celebrate the occasion, we decided to film a music video for the second single I released off of the album. I think it came out splendid - in particular, I'm very happy with the shots where I keep switching instruments, and the shots at the end in the suit.

I hope you enjoy it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2nHH2D4CUQ
 
I think if you had put more shots of you walking down the street while playing the guitar it would have helped a lot.

I felt like that shot had a lot of energy where as the shots of you playing different instruments and trying to write got really repetitive.

I really enjoyed the music.
 
Shooting at a more interesting location with some production design would have improved the video. Also, play around with color correction and grading.

Edit: I just read your post again and you weren't actually asking for critiques, so ignore me if you'd like :)
 
Shooting at a more interesting location with some production design would have improved the video. Also, play around with color correction and grading.

Edit: I just read your post again and you weren't actually asking for critiques, so ignore me if you'd like :)


I appreciate the critiques! I do agree the video gets a bit monotonous and could have used more locations and shots - my friend who directed it and came up with the idea was very last minute, since I wanted to get the video out before the album the next day.
For a last minute effort, I was very pleased with it, but I absolutely agree with your ideas!
 
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