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Well it is a title of my second short film :P

I made it back in 2011 with not much of experiece (it was my second short) the second time I acted and the first time for the actress and made it with 2 of my friends with also no film making experience - ok I know I am excusting myself... But anyway....

Can you please have a look at that film (it is 15 mins long! :cool: ) it took us 5 days to film it =/

Your feedback is VERY welcome as well as constructive criticism :cool: please?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9WvQ-1-ygJ8
 
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Nice short! One of your best so far.

The audio sounds pretty bad though. The scene when you are hitting her head against the door didn't look very realistic, camera movement is a bit shaky every now and then, and there seems to be something wrong with the widescreen bars. But overall, I liked it. The cinematography, writing, and acting is very good. You and the other actress are great in it.

Keep it up :)
 
aw... thank you guys! :)

about the audio - it was the most amateur production you could see, me and my friends... my canon 60d and video mix attached onto it... that's all, the rest for left to my creativity lol

about camera shakiness... yes... maybe too much, but I did want the rough feeling for it, as it was supposed to be imagination... (if you watched it you know what I mean, dont want to spoil it for others if they bother to watch it as well :P )

And btw... if you guys have IMDb accounts, please feel free to vote it :D :D 10 would be like... nice :P
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2100545/
 
LDS said:
about the audio - it was the most amateur production you could see, me and my friends... my canon 60d and video mix attached onto it... that's all, the rest for left to my creativity lol

about camera shakiness... yes... maybe too much, but I did want the rough feeling for it, as it was supposed to be imagination... (if you watched it you know what I mean, dont want to spoil it for others if they bother to watch it as well :P )

And btw... if you guys have IMDb accounts, please feel free to vote it :D :D 10 would be like... nice :P
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2100545/
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Well considering the budget and gear it's pretty impressive. Good job :)
 
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