I have this short film I would like to share with you guys

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Hi Sam,

Just to let you know, people normally post their short films in this section here: http://www.indietalk.com/forumdisplay.php?f=56 just a heads up ;)

I think the 3rd minute was my favourite part of your film. I liked the fast cuts between the guy in the car tearing up his degree and him running, I thought that worked quite well. The other shot I quite liked was at 3:09 with the tilt of the camera.

On the music side I don't think Moonlight Sonata worked, I feel like it didn't fit in with the story that well, whereas Seventh Symphony built up the emotion better.
 
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EmilyNancyJean said:
Hi Sam,

Just to let you know, people normally post their short films in this section here: http://www.indietalk.com/forumdisplay.php?f=56 just a heads up ;)

I think the 3rd minute was my favourite part of your film. I liked the fast cuts between the guy in the car tearing up his degree and him running, I thought that worked quite well. The other shot I quite liked was at 3:09 with the tilt of the camera.

On the music side I don't think Moonlight Sonata worked, I feel like it didn't fit in with the story that well, whereas Seventh Symphony built up the emotion better.
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You seem to know your way around quite well already with just 8 posts :)

Sam: as Emily said I'm not sure the music suited it, maybe a little bit in the second half. TBH I'm not sure why it was in black and white either and I'm not sure that I got the ending sorry :huh:

I think the text, especially the letters perhaps could have been a narration which could have filled the whole film.

Here I am saying all the things that I would do differently when there are a number of good elements. When the music stopped that really got my attention. Visuals were pretty good and I didn't notice any awkward angles. Good work
 
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