I'm writing a script and, although it isn't necessarily about martial arts, some people do employ them in certain scenes. How can you write this? I wrote this scene for instance, please correct it!
" They enter. The other gangsters surround them. The Key readies himself and uses martial arts. The thugs also know how to fight. They fight hand to hand, using whatever object they can find as weapons. Three gangsters. The rest flee, alongside the party guests. The Key takes one down, then fights the other two. One forced to the ground, the other one keeps fighting. The Key defeats him, then kills him. The other one is also beaten to death. Then, they leave the house. "
" They enter. The other gangsters surround them. The Key readies himself and uses martial arts. The thugs also know how to fight. They fight hand to hand, using whatever object they can find as weapons. Three gangsters. The rest flee, alongside the party guests. The Key takes one down, then fights the other two. One forced to the ground, the other one keeps fighting. The Key defeats him, then kills him. The other one is also beaten to death. Then, they leave the house. "
