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How does this tagline sound?

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While my screenwriting partner is writing up the screenplay idea I had, I'm writing up this story for my writing class and I'm thinking of using the following tagline below for this story I'm writing, which is about this guy who discovers the truth about God and religion after going through numerous family and life tragedies. The tagline is:


"Sometimes through tragedies, we discover the truth."


So how does that sound? Does it sound ok? cool enough?
 
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Nice, except a great theory about religion doesn't look like that. It is about greed. "Let's please the boss and he'll give us some advantages." Then the part that is ruling people's thinking, about a god out there, is a result of something that can be explained with development psychology.
 
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Filman said:
Nice, except a great theory about religion doesn't look like that. It is about greed. "Let's please the boss and he'll give us some advantages." Then the part that is ruling people's thinking, about a god out there, is a result of something that can be explained with development psychology.
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True but I have taken on a misotheism approach after years of being a strong and true christian and what I've come to realize after my dad, two brothers and I spending almost a year and a half living out of our car and then sleeping at metro bus stations is that religion and christianity is that God exists....he just doesn't care....If he cared, there would be no homeless people, no people getting sick and dying.....Tragedies wouldn't happen if he cared, if he listened to prayers and if he helped people who came and called on him and his so-called "religious followers/christians" aren't any better, they're all about taking people's tithe money on Sundays but then when you call on them for help, they act like they're deaf to hearing, meanwhile, they're driving around in big fancy cars and living in big homes while they're church members are taking two or three buses just to GET to their church. :) But - I'm not trying to turn this thread or forum into a religious one lol
 
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