2 minute doc about how everyone smokes differently - http://vimeo.com/22124398
would love a critique
would love a critique
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Is this a documentary, or a commercial?
Since this is your first post, I don't know if you're a serious filmmaker or not, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. This is very nice camera-work. The film looks beautiful.
But if you're trying to make a documentary, uhh, your message is muddled. This movie pretty much does absolutely nothing but make smoking look cool. You should send this to Altria, cuz they might give you money for it.
Since this is your first post, I don't know if you're a serious filmmaker or not, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. This is very nice camera-work. The film looks beautiful.
But if you're trying to make a documentary, uhh, your message is muddled. This movie pretty much does absolutely nothing but make smoking look cool. You should send this to Altria, cuz they might give you money for it.
I liked it. Especially the "love will get you in the end" vibe.
Oh, and your aspect-ratio is jacked up. Everything is being stretched horizontally. Looks weird. Fix that problem and you've got a video that looks terrific.
This. Whatever it is you shot, it wasn't a documentary.