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watch Horror Short Film Preview - 7 days

Not a bad idea. But could be better. The shot looks bad. It's not a bad shot, but whatever you've done to it, is not very good. The BOOM should hit with the shot change. Instead you go meekly from the radio to a face, and then BOOM. Why? It's BOOM - FACE together. Timing it's all about timing. 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and

I was quite pleased with my 39 second preview. Not that I mind the criticism, but you may be over thinking it...a bit. :lol:

Thanks for your input.
 
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