Here is my short film, "Everything Dissolves". Thoughts?

[Wise Films]

Hey guys so a quick back story on me. I graduated college a few months ago with film as my major and I have just finished a very short film. I worked on it solo and would like to hear any comments and criticism you guys may have. Thanks and enjoy!

https://vimeo.com/72566057

This short film floats alongside a young girl who is finding it difficult to let go of things reminiscent of her past.
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Model: Shannen Driscoll
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Music: Sigur Rós- Glósóli
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Canon T3i
Glidecam HD 2000
Konova Slider
Tokina 11-16
50mm 1.4
Fader ND
Cut and Graded in Sony Vegas
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[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Hello new dude!

Cool short. The cinematography and music were great. Very short, but well put together. I liked the fast editing at the end as well.

 

[Wise Films]

thank ya Chimp! I am glad you liked the pace of the film, I wanted it to be a tad longer but did not film enough I suppose!

 

[dmontgom]

That was really well done, and I think any longer may have been too much. Just a nice build up to the ending.

 

[rayw]

Looks gorgeous.
Very nice.

You should shoot commercials for vacation resorts.

 

[Wise Films]

That was really well done, and I think any longer may have been too much. Just a nice build up to the ending.

thank you so much I agree I think it was short enough to keep your attention.

Looks gorgeous.
Very nice.

You should shoot commercials for vacation resorts.

I appreciate it! I would love to do vacation resort ads haha! I am filming my first real estate "walkthrough" soon if that is somehow related haha