Im thinking it needs a little work. I hate writing these things.
Logline:
(Drama/Thriller) – After his ex-girlfriend is murdered and he becomes the prime suspect, a young man is blackmailed by the perpetrator into killing a complete stranger.
Synopsis:
Is the life of a complete stranger worth more than your happiness?
A random encounter between two strangers. Jeffrey, a recent college graduate, meets Logan, an established attorney, when they are the only patrons at a breakfast joint. Jeffrey is faced with an impending custody battle with his ex-girlfriend and their son. Logan, who is currently undergoing a bitter divorce, suggests a solution to both of their problems; each man murder the other man’s ex. Jeffrey assumes Logan is obviously joking, so he agrees with the proposition.
Soon after, Jeffrey’s ex-girlfriend is dead and Logan wants Jeffrey to hold up his end of the bargain. With an abundance of evidence and the element of motive working against him, Jeffrey must decide whether or not his happiness and freedom is worth the life of a woman he has never met.
Any comments would be appreciated.
Logline:
(Drama/Thriller) – After his ex-girlfriend is murdered and he becomes the prime suspect, a young man is blackmailed by the perpetrator into killing a complete stranger.
Synopsis:
Is the life of a complete stranger worth more than your happiness?
A random encounter between two strangers. Jeffrey, a recent college graduate, meets Logan, an established attorney, when they are the only patrons at a breakfast joint. Jeffrey is faced with an impending custody battle with his ex-girlfriend and their son. Logan, who is currently undergoing a bitter divorce, suggests a solution to both of their problems; each man murder the other man’s ex. Jeffrey assumes Logan is obviously joking, so he agrees with the proposition.
Soon after, Jeffrey’s ex-girlfriend is dead and Logan wants Jeffrey to hold up his end of the bargain. With an abundance of evidence and the element of motive working against him, Jeffrey must decide whether or not his happiness and freedom is worth the life of a woman he has never met.
Any comments would be appreciated.