https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a08WKGamS7o
The Grim Reaper has come to claim a new victim.
I'd love opinions on the vfx and sfx.
The Grim Reaper has come to claim a new victim.
I'd love opinions on the vfx and sfx.
Upvote
0
-
✅ Technical and creative solutions for your film.
✅ Screenplay formatting help, plot and story guidance.
✅ A respectful community of professionals and newbies.
✅ Network with composers, editors, cast, crew, and more!
🎬 IndieTalk - Filmmaking and Screenwriting help site and community.
By filmmakers, for filmmakers since 2003
archived-videos Grim reaper short film
- Thread starter brandonf.roberts
- Start date
I appreciate the brevity of the video, first of all. Too often do these videos linger on. and on.
Moving on,
Production quality is nice. The effects coming from the hand were believably good - and the 'sucking' type effect coming out of the guy's face, also not bad. My only gripe would be the skull on the face. It just looks like you took a skull PNG file and slapped it on face, turning down the transparency. Not to say it looked horrible, it didn't. But if you spent more time crafting the skull to his face, it would help. (Especially in regard to making sure the skull only covers the face - since you just overlaid the skull, it was also covering some of his hair and whatnot, which lessens the believability a bit)
Overall, nice job!
Moving on,
Production quality is nice. The effects coming from the hand were believably good - and the 'sucking' type effect coming out of the guy's face, also not bad. My only gripe would be the skull on the face. It just looks like you took a skull PNG file and slapped it on face, turning down the transparency. Not to say it looked horrible, it didn't. But if you spent more time crafting the skull to his face, it would help. (Especially in regard to making sure the skull only covers the face - since you just overlaid the skull, it was also covering some of his hair and whatnot, which lessens the believability a bit)
Overall, nice job!