Between the title and the opening shot, it was pretty obvious what was going to happen. That being the case you really need to bring the funny, or get those guys tied up in an unexpected way. Black haired dude's part was pretty good, but could have used a lot less "okay now I'm going into "trick you" mode" (I just put parenthesis inside of parenthesis) and used a more subtle delivery to the trickeration. That way, the audience gets the pleasure of "discovering" your deception. Instead of him asking the girl if she knows anything about cars, have her just blurt it out. "Look I don't know anything about cars, but $5000 seems like a lot to me." "Well this car does have 10000 HP, sub-zero AC, and tires that don't wear out. ......etc" He doesn't let you know her's going to trick her, he just does it.
I would have loved to see more from the red head.
The two girl seemed a little stiff. I felt they wanted to dive into the part but didn't quite make it. Maybe some more rehearsals??? IDK but they really needed to sell "ditsy chick" a lot more.
I did like the initial assault where she kicks him over then you pull back to red-head jumping.
that was probably the funniest moment in the film for me.
I thought it looked good. Sound was pretty good. The music fit.
I enjoyed it. Keep it up.
