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Daiwoo
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Hello everyone, newb here. 
I just wanted everyone's honest opinion about this idea for a screenplay i have. Here it goes...
All the governments on earth are at war with eachother, (over land, goods, money, etc.). So one government agency decides it needs something/someone to infiltrate their foe's base, to take them out from the inside. They decide to create a "super human". By, superhuman i don't mean "super hero" with extraordinary powers. I mean a person who has cababilities above an average human. (example: just plain stronger in all senses combined). Anyway, they finally create this super human, a women named Sydnee Thomas. (The names "Thomas" coming fro m the surname of the scientist who created her). So, she begins her work, and gains a partner through the intelligance agency named Raj Tyler, (this is where the romance starts). Throughout the film a series of biblical events happen to Sydnee, (because she was not created normal, but as a weapon to be used.)
Religious Experiance Ideas:
1. She experiancs Hell, which would be portrayed not as hot or firey but as cold and damp.
2. Satan will be portrayed as a homeless man at first, but is able to change identity at will.
3. God will not be seen, he simply plays a role that is small but mysterious because Sydnee is so unsure of him after Satan gives her a long epilogue in which he explains that God is a worthless deity that is responsible for world's conflicts. Satan would also explain that such conflicts could not be undone, even by one with her skills.
During Sydnee's meeting with Satan, he would steal some kind of DNA off her body, (currently undecided, maybe a hair follicle or something). And he creates his own clone of her, (hence the "Gemini Spy").
After that...i don't know what really happens. That was as far as i thought, for now. But it's late in Jersey, and I'm half asleep writing this
, so if there are any grammar mistakes feel free to point them out.
Any feedback on these ideas would be greatly appreciated. Thank You.
P.S. - The name "Thomas" means "twin"...That is why I chose the name.
I just wanted everyone's honest opinion about this idea for a screenplay i have. Here it goes...
All the governments on earth are at war with eachother, (over land, goods, money, etc.). So one government agency decides it needs something/someone to infiltrate their foe's base, to take them out from the inside. They decide to create a "super human". By, superhuman i don't mean "super hero" with extraordinary powers. I mean a person who has cababilities above an average human. (example: just plain stronger in all senses combined). Anyway, they finally create this super human, a women named Sydnee Thomas. (The names "Thomas" coming fro m the surname of the scientist who created her). So, she begins her work, and gains a partner through the intelligance agency named Raj Tyler, (this is where the romance starts). Throughout the film a series of biblical events happen to Sydnee, (because she was not created normal, but as a weapon to be used.)
Religious Experiance Ideas:
1. She experiancs Hell, which would be portrayed not as hot or firey but as cold and damp.
2. Satan will be portrayed as a homeless man at first, but is able to change identity at will.
3. God will not be seen, he simply plays a role that is small but mysterious because Sydnee is so unsure of him after Satan gives her a long epilogue in which he explains that God is a worthless deity that is responsible for world's conflicts. Satan would also explain that such conflicts could not be undone, even by one with her skills.
During Sydnee's meeting with Satan, he would steal some kind of DNA off her body, (currently undecided, maybe a hair follicle or something). And he creates his own clone of her, (hence the "Gemini Spy").
After that...i don't know what really happens. That was as far as i thought, for now. But it's late in Jersey, and I'm half asleep writing this
, so if there are any grammar mistakes feel free to point them out.Any feedback on these ideas would be greatly appreciated. Thank You
.P.S. - The name "Thomas" means "twin"...That is why I chose the name.
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