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Nice shots, although the edit seems a bit arbitrary as if the order of the shots is not important.
In relation to the music you can also take a closer look at the edit: for example on 1:07 the is a snare in the music, which is a short and tight sound, while you use a cross fade.
A straight cut on the beat would probably work better.
Having said that: the shots are well done: I know how much effort and time it takes to make them