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fwarunique

Hey guys,

I made a short film, a wrote the script in a hour and shot it over a couple of hours, edited it one afternoon, kinda new, please let me know what you think of it, I already know for other people suggestions, that you can kinda see where the screen is split, and that I should have been tighter with the dialogue, but its good for a first shot, let me know what you think, and any suggestions on how I can improve, or if at lease you found it funny. Cheers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Vc_zBoERU8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Vc_zBoERU8
 
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