archived-videos Fractured (Thriller/Drama)

[CynicalOwl]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgUn_DUvVAg

probably better to watch high () , but it's a trippy thriller featuring a young woman with a dark secret. (2mins)

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[8salacious9]

i liked it but only on an artistic level. loved the synth sounds.

the quality was spot on for me, it was rustic messy grimey adding to that sense of something.

not bad overall

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Nice work! The cinematography and concept is great. Although the audio did seem a little poor and some shots were a bit too shaky and out of focus. Impressive overall.

 

[A.D.]

Great concept! By far the strongest part of it. I liked it.

I saw the reveal coming staight away though (no shots of the actresses face), so it kinda spoiled the revelation for me.

I think I'd enjoy seeing the story played out slightly longer, but it would become obvious to even the slowest of viewers. A 1st person POV a la the Prodigy's 'Smack my bitch up' vid would work well for this.

 

[CynicalOwl]

Thanks for the feedback! I will take these audio notes into consideration for the next one!