archived-videos "Foreign Market" - Short Comedy Mocumentary series - Feedback required!

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Hi guys!

We started a short mocumentary series for Uni, would really appreciate some honest feedback! Don't hold back, by as critical as you can please! In addition to general feedback, I would also appreciate some feedback on the acting.

It started as one 8 minute episode (8 Minute time limit for Uni), but we had too much footage so we decided to make it 3 episodes and we are going to finish off the "mini series" this holidays over maybe another 4 or 5 episodes.

There is some profanity at parts (The F Bomb), but apart from that it's failry tame.

We get a lot of laughs from people that know us, but we really want some external/objective feedback from outsiders.

I hope you can find the time to watch it. Thanks so much for your time guys, its much appreciated!


Episode 1:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Hf1hwxtKOY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Hf1hwxtKOY


Episode 2:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_fzMvCdK4M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_fzMvCdK4M


Episode 3:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DGhOFeCwKg4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DGhOFeCwKg4
 
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