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watch First Short Film: GET THE BAG

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Hello new dude! :cool:

Nice first short film. Overall well done, but there's definitely room for improvement.

The color grading needs some work, the audio isn't very good, some shots are slightly overexposed, some more camera movement would greatly improve it, and it's a bit slow. Get into the story quicker.

Although nice for a first short. I'm impressed. Solid story and acting. Keep up the great work and continue to improve.

Also, great work with the makeup (twigs+dirt), most people don't even bother to do things like that during a film that takes place during a storm/apocalyptic scenario. It bugs me when people come out squeaky clean.

:welcome:
 
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