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First script and i would really like some feedback

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Hey, welcome to IT! Thanks for sharing your first work with us. I know that that is daring to do. I do think you need some work to do on this one.

Well that was macabre. Holy shit, that's the whole story?! I think you need to go hug your mom, cuz that right there is one of the most misogynist screenplays I've ever read. Also, there's no story. This is a monologue.
 
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