watch First proper short skit: 'Cocaine'

[GradeBFilms]

Hey everyone, I'm just new to this forum so I thought what better way to introduce myself with some of my work! I directed this one, and my friend wrote it. I'd appreciate any criticism of it, as I know there are some issues with it, although I realise I'm not quite an Oscar winning actor yet
Anyway...see what you think!


Link since I can't get the embed to work: http://youtu.be/8-RUMObdJJc



Thanks for your time, everyone!

 

[mus]

it would help if i could see more than a blank, white square

 

[GradeBFilms]

Huh, yeah. Sorry about that. Fixing now.

Edit: Not sure what's wrong...can someone help? I put the link between the https://www.youtube.com/watch?v= tags...