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watch First Music Video

Beatlesfan1225

Beatlesfan1225

This my first music video I've shot for a song that's on my soon to be released album. (Funny enough, the only song on the album not written by myself)

I think it came out pretty well.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akWXffUlD0E

oh and for some reason my YT links always look like white boxes to me (I have no idea if you guys can see that or not too, so I'll post the link below too)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akWXffUlD0E
 
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well..... to me personally a music video has to tell a story.... all i see is the talent walking with a guitar singing the song....
 
Stopped watching at 1:30.

The very first wide (establishing) shot was shakey, the actor is sitting on a bench in a shadow, the better lit part of the image is out of the field of action -- two serious blunders. This was followed by a long and uninteresting walk. Not even Elvis himself would have been able to keep my attention.

Good luck though.
 
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I loved the original song. This version was pretty good too.

What was on the lens that kept moving?! Was that dust or something?
 
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