archived-videos first episode of my new web series

jeemseems said:
it's called 'series'

here's the first episode (series: movie): https://vimeo.com/107545584

already hard at work on episode 2!

would love some feedback!

thanks!
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Firstly, congratulations on completing this. I always think that completing a project is the hardest part. And as you have asked for feedback:

1. Got bored around the 1 minute mark when nothing had happened. Fast forwarded it a little and then turned off.
2. 25 seconds of black screen with not a particularly engaging soundtrack at the beginning... It had me checking my laptop to see if there was a problem with my Wifi.

I'm not a particularly advanced or good film maker. But I do know something has to happen. Anything. And preferably light it to make it less flat. Couldn't tell you about the dialogue as didn't get that far.
 
thanks gorillaonabike!

for the first episode i kinda just wanted to introduce the characters, what their morning routines are like, etc

for the second episode im trying to have a more active storyline
 
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