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The 5min short film is about a insomniac who becomes incresingly paranoied about his friend spying on him. We are filming on location in London and in the Studio in Falmouth. Directed by James Wright. Starring Edward Cartwright & Nick Hayle

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This is a great short. Lighting was handled well in most places. I especially liked the lighting on the lead in the pub scene --great highlights and shadows. Great use of local settings to keep things moving around. I also liked the incidental music and sound effects. Performances and the story were also good.

There were a few moments where the lighting seemed a little dark (climax scene on the sidewalk and the stairwell). Some of the voice overdubs were a little difficult to understand. The opening credits font is too small and gets lost due to poor YouTube compression.

Overall a very good movie!
 
Hi everyone. The short looks nice, still i'd say that the interior shots would definitely profit from adding more environmental objects, contributing to the feeling of depth of the scene. Besides, some cuts would require revising.
 
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