Hello,
I have finally finished a full draft of my script. I've been tweaking it many times bit by bit but I am hoping that I am heading towards the right direction. I need feedback on my action writing and dialouge. Hopefully the story is good as well.
I've provided a link to a sample of my script on google drive - 15 pages.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B32svqt43-9nUGVnR1h0U2VUVGs/view?usp=sharing
Please comment on what you think? if anybody has the time that if they enjoy the 15 page sample, that they can read my full script? PM me if you like to read the full script to give feedback on.
Logline: Having survived a devastating tsunami that claimed the lives of their parents, two school age siblings face hardships and unsettling consequences in their own lives.
I have finally finished a full draft of my script. I've been tweaking it many times bit by bit but I am hoping that I am heading towards the right direction. I need feedback on my action writing and dialouge. Hopefully the story is good as well.
I've provided a link to a sample of my script on google drive - 15 pages.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B32svqt43-9nUGVnR1h0U2VUVGs/view?usp=sharing
Please comment on what you think? if anybody has the time that if they enjoy the 15 page sample, that they can read my full script? PM me if you like to read the full script to give feedback on.
Logline: Having survived a devastating tsunami that claimed the lives of their parents, two school age siblings face hardships and unsettling consequences in their own lives.
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