archived-videos Feature film "limp." trailer and preview clip

[Shaun Ryan]

Heya everybody,

Here are links to some promotional videos for my first feature film that I have directed and written i'd love to get your feedback on it so let me know what you think. Here is the trailer http://vimeo.com/23562184 and here is a short preview of a scene in the film http://vimeo.com/22593895 hope your all keeping well.

Thanks,
Shaun

 

[TheKoreandonut]

I liked your trailer. The scene you you had uploaded is pretty good as well. But I was wondering if you purposely wanted to keep it one continuous shot. I think you were going for emotion, but something about the way it was shot takes away from that. I suggest you plan the travel of the camera ahead of time to get the best shot possible. The slow-mo should probably be a little more slow. Also, some of the actors kinda looked like they were playing around which took away from the mood. By the way I'm an amateur myself so I understand how difficult it is to make this type of film. I can't wait to see it!