archived-videos Fallen: Part One

[Ladon]

I just stumbled across this site a few hours ago, and decided to see what kind of feedback I could get.
This is a film I made a year ago, I'm just beginning to work on Part Two now. It was recieved well on Brickfilms.com, but I'm looking for some varied feedback from other sources. Criticism welcome

http://ladon.brickfilms.com/Fallen_Part1.rmvb

It's in rm format, as I've been unsuccessful in bringing it down to a reasonable size in a quicktime file. I tend to avoid WM and AVI, but they're next for me to attempt it in.

-Ladon, hoping he's gone about this in the right way.

 

[Ladon]

http://www.ladon.brickfilms.com/Fallen_part1_lg.mov

Well, I found the quicktime version. 45 meg download.

if this doesn't go where it's supposed to, it's because this weird forum refreshed when I was typing.

 

[knightly]

mov is on it's way down