I showed a cut to my friends of my shortfilm and asked their opinion on my cuts and if anything can be improved. They said it was all good and the only thing they noticed that looked strange was this. Fast forward 30 seconds in:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TYI8GnHKupk
So basically it starts out with an over the shoulder shot, then cuts to more a bit more of a closer up, then cuts back to the original shot, a third of a second later about. Does it look okay?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TYI8GnHKupk
So basically it starts out with an over the shoulder shot, then cuts to more a bit more of a closer up, then cuts back to the original shot, a third of a second later about. Does it look okay?