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watch Dissolve- Dark Comedy Short!

justinisfilming

justinisfilming

My new film is now out! This one was made for a class at a film school here in Chicago.
Thoughts and feedback are greatly appreciated! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3knt-rauSBs
 
well done fellow chicago filmer :)

hey there, that was awesome :) very good job and concept, good acting too, hey i got a short im doing thats in post prod. if youd like to check it out, we just have the FB page for now, but will be setting things up soon https://www.facebook.com/Thefrozenfather

anyhow, so your a chicago filmmaker?, im in chicago too, been working in film as well, anyways would love to hear from you! :)
 
I liked it. If i were you i would try to be a bit more obvious about the fact that hes about to commit suicide. I mean, a single pill and a letter doesnt make him look like a guy whos about to commit a suicide.
 
LOVE the opening shot, the up down panning was killer. Then the mirror to sitting down shot was also very nifty. Soundtrack very nice, and you did it yourself?! Applause, sir. Audio could have been improved, but didn't distract at all.


Pavelcz said:
i would try to be a bit more obvious about the fact that hes about to commit suicide.
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I gotta disagree, I liked the subtlety. I had plenty of information to quickly discover he's trying to commit suicide.
 
ATLANTISshort said:
hey there, that was awesome :) very good job and concept, good acting too, hey i got a short im doing thats in post prod. if youd like to check it out, we just have the FB page for now, but will be setting things up soon https://www.facebook.com/Thefrozenfather

anyhow, so your a chicago filmmaker?, im in chicago too, been working in film as well, anyways would love to hear from you! :)
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Thanks for the feedback! And yes, I am from Chicago as well!
 
samwagner1000 said:
LOVE the opening shot, the up down panning was killer. Then the mirror to sitting down shot was also very nifty. Soundtrack very nice, and you did it yourself?! Applause, sir. Audio could have been improved, but didn't distract at all.




I gotta disagree, I liked the subtlety. I had plenty of information to quickly discover he's trying to commit suicide.
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Thanks for the feedback! And I'm glad you liked the shots. It was a very close collaboration between my DP and I. :)
 
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