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watch Dirty Laundry - 5 min dark comedy

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Frank Carroll

Hi all,

I would appreciate some feedback and comments on my first short film. I would advise that the film has an adult theme and is possibly NSFW.

https://vimeo.com/82241574

It's titled Dirty Laundry. The film is an inquisitive look at interaction between opposite sexes, in a way that challenges both the stereotypes and facts of communication.

Hope you enjoy it.

Frank
 
I don't know if it's only my problem but when they say something I hear kind of harsh, distorted noise. But otherwise nicely done. I like the ending "You like doggy style?" ;)
 
Hmm I'm not sure what that noise is. I haven't had any comments about the noise so far but that may be traffic/buzzing lights being picked up by our sound recordist?

Thank you for watching and for your comments though :)
 
Frank Carroll said:
Hi all,

I would appreciate some feedback and comments on my first short film. I would advise that the film has an adult theme and is possibly NSFW.

https://vimeo.com/82241574

It's titled Dirty Laundry. The film is an inquisitive look at interaction between opposite sexes, in a way that challenges both the stereotypes and facts of communication.

Hope you enjoy it.

Frank
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That was funny. Lots of stuff to be picky about but I genuinely enjoyed it!
 
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