watch Diary of a Serial Killer

[justinlawson]

This is my groups first short film, and we would like to get as much advice and critique as possible. The first link below was a teaser trailer for the film to kind of boost interest amongst our limited viewers. The second is the final product of which I am very proud mostly because we wound up having to do a lot of creative workarounds. So again, any comments and feedback would be well regarded! Thanks!

Diary of a Serial Killer - Trailer
http://youtu.be/9ysrAInrAEo
and
Diary of a Serial Killer - Full
http://youtu.be/_WmNjsocmao

 

[eomer41]

I thought the trailer gave away the twist in the movie. I watched that before the short film/

The twist in the movie seems to work OK. I just didn't like the ending, very down. I don't really like bloody violent films but it looks like this was the direction you wanted this to be. I did like the camera work and the voice over narration.

Hope these comments help.

 

[SpiderMonkey]

haha that was pretty legit.. it kept me following and i loved it.. the trailer was cool did kidna give it away, the whole beginning scene of the movie could of been the trailer ha..

but overall it was sick, voice over could be a tad higher and the ending a little bit more crunchy it ya get me, not just a gun shot and 5 seconds of the door ya know?

more please!!!!